Thursday 6 April 2017

Camp MERC Acrostic Poem




W.a.l.t edit and revise my Camp Merc writing for clarity and impact in response to feedback 


Learning Reflection     

I did not make changes to my poem.

Next time I am going to sit next to someone that can give me feedback to make my writing better and I will look for the squiggly red line so I can fix my spelling.  

2 comments:

Unknown said...

I enjoyed reading your camp merc acrostic poem Chloe and all the fun activities that you did at camp. Remember it is important to take the time to always edit your writing so that you keep the reader interested in your writing.

Anonymous said...

OK I will do that next time